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Showing VS Telling

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A medium close up shot

        This medium close up shot shows us that clearly one of them are injured due to the blood stains on his shirt also he is laying probably unconscious, his partner is calling for the Paramedics to come instantly to the scene. The agent on the phone has his eyes narrowed, his nostrils flared, eyes are smaller, and mouth opened, this implies to me that he is angry that he let the guys that shot his partner get away but he is in a hurry to save his friend,

A long shot

A Very Wide Shot

 

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    jnorth

    Hello Moniem,

    I like you close analysis of the close up above. Your meaning is very clear and you have a good attention to detail. I am also pleased to see that you are developing inferences about emotions; this is really good work.

    Be careful with sentence lengths – try to use only two clauses per sentence.

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